[fiction] Tweaked

2004-12-14 15:19[personal profile] digitaldiscipline
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Thanks to some handy feedback, a couple of spots I hadn't been satisfied with have been massaged. I'm still not perfectly satisfied with every word in it, but it's further away from sucking now than it was last night.

Going to stop at the postal orifice on the way home and shoot this sucker off. Eeep.
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