[fiction] Tweaked

[digitaldiscipline]

Thanks to some handy feedback, a couple of spots I hadn't been satisfied with have been massaged. I'm still not perfectly satisfied with every word in it, but it's further away from sucking now than it was last night.

Going to stop at the postal orifice on the way home and shoot this sucker off. Eeep.

Comments

[david-deacon.livejournal.com]

Let us know when it sees the light of print and I'll check a copy out.

[etcet.livejournal.com]

i think they're making decisions and notifications in february, so it'll be a while.

[marchenland.livejournal.com]

No shooting at the postal orifice!

Man, don't even joke about that shit! ;)

[etcet.livejournal.com]

bwaahahahahaha.

i totally didn't intend that comment. the last four times i've hit the P.O., i've used the self-service weigh-and-pay kiosk. which, as best as i can tell, is unarmed. ;-)

[inlaterdays.livejournal.com]

luck!!

[aynjel.livejournal.com]

Yay for farther away from sucking!

[etcet.livejournal.com]

well, depending on context. . . *grin*

[now, to find someone in the biz who'll buy -me- scotch. . . ]

[aynjel.livejournal.com]

Well, yes, both of those go without saying...

[etcet.livejournal.com]

but now they've not only been said, but replied to.